I totally agree! It was that "even as he broke every other vow he had ever made" bit that got to me most! Very, very well done. And Harry being so afraid of himself around Draco since that dream (CREEPY DREAM OF AWFULNESS as I shall deem it hence! CDoA! Hmph) was very effective. It'll make things that much better when they get all ... Cuddly, afterwards. ; )